First Draft Feedback

During the post production process we have only interracted with a few of our classmates who have had time to look at our video and give us feedback. This week we finished a first draft and decided to share it with the class to get their opinion on our video and see what we should change.

Here are some particular quotes we have taken into consideration:

"There needs to be more random things from the beginning of the video to make it a running theme"

"There should be performance shots throughout the whole video because they are really nice shots and it's confusing when they just stop"

"Some of the random things have links and some don't maybe you should make them all have a link to show consistency"

"The break up at the end needs to be more obvious with more angry and close up shots"

We have decided we are going to get even more random shots and put them in from the beginning and consider putting performance shots, filming more, and adding them throughout to keep the emphasis on the introduction of the artist. We are also going to film some more angry shots to make the break up more obvious and re consider some random shots.