Thursday, 5 December 2013

Feedback on First Draft!



We presented our music video to the class and left a feedback form for feedback. As you can see our class peer assessed our work and particularly liked the cutting speed, reverse shots, story line and time lapse. It was commented on that there isn't enough performance shots consistently through the video and that some shots aren't relevant. We have therefore decided to shoot some more performance shots and replace some of the random shots with more obviously linked shots. We are also considering shooting more break up shots for our own peace of mind so the story line is blatantly obvious.

It was commented that I need to add production credits on my CD and badges/icons on my magazine article to make it look more 'legit' and professional. This is something I had totally forgotten to do and will definitely make my products look better. I was in two minds about the font I'd used but I received positive feedback on this and so have decided to stick with my original choice. 

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