Monday, 16 December 2013

Evaluation

In what ways does your media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products?

(refer to your planning and research, what conventions did you find and use? what conventions did you challenge? refer to your audience feedback on your products)

We used conventions seen in a few of Lana Del Rey’s videos, in particular Video Games. Video Games was our main inspiration but we also looked at her other videos and videos by Ellie Goulding such as “I need your Love” and used techniques from these too. We particularly liked how Lana Del Rey’s performance shots were so entrancing and used this technique in our own product by using close up and medium shots with the artist keeping constant eye contact with the camera and her facial expressions being exaggerated by make up and the basic background and clothing. We also used the quick paced, gritty and random combination of shot sequences to create a believable montage of memories. Lana Del Rey’s video uses a variety of shot types, cutting speeds and a mixed up content to create the overall feel. Both Lana Del Rey’s music videos Video Games and Carmen used the effect of handheld footage as though the camera is being held by someone involved in the shot which makes the material believable and authentic. The inclusion of the random shots make the videos not solely about the narrative of two actors. Instead, the random shots add a different edge to the narrative explaining concepts and feelings not easily portrayed through acting such as a rose that connotes danger or seduction through its colour but its vulnerability and gentleness being so easily damaged or the shot of the drunken couple in Video Games which makes the narrative believable as clearly things haven’t been edited to create a ‘story’. We included a flower in our video and also included a variety of shots in the break up part of our video that look as real as possible, the flower was one of our favourite shots as we picked the red petals off in the beginning of the video to possibly foreshadow the devastation about to happen or simply show the vulnerability of the artist in the narrative. The shot of the bright red roses early on also infers to the audience that the shots have connotations and so they can apply this to shots later on such as the swing. Lana Del Rey’s performance shots are strategically placed in parts where the lyrics need to be exaggerated by her facial expression we also used this technique. Early on in the video, Video Games and Carmen,  the narrative is introduced bluntly with obvious quite cliche shots of the couple who are clearly in a relationship the video then goes on to show shots that may off throw this previously simple narrative. We included this in our video by using shots of nettles which are easily recognisable as painful yet natural. We also gained a lot of inspiration for specific shots from artists such as Lana Del Rey and Ellie Goulding, from Lana Del Rey we liked the spinning palm tree shots which are clearly handheld but worked particularly well with our natural theme throughout the video. We also liked the shots Ellie Goulding and Calvin Harris used in the I need your love video of the car driving down the road but skipping parts to look like they are driving fast, we used this technique in a corridor shot. We used sped up shots with inspiration from the Lana Del Rey Carmen video where the speed of the rose is manipulated and it looks like the rose is growing in seconds. The music video Carmen includes gritty footage that flickers to create an effect similar to this we added the sepia tone which worked in the same way and made the footage seem aged. The random shots found in the majority of Lana Del Rey’s videos add confusion to the narrative but engage the audience to unpick what meaning is meant, this is reflected in our video as most of the shots have a connotation. In the Lana Del Rey video Summertime Sadness there is the filming of clouds, we wanted to use things similar to this but develop them so we used time lapse to enhance this shot this was also the same for shots in the same video like the slight crossfading of smoke over performance shots we developed this by crossfading different things over performance shots for a longer time to exaggerate the blending and links between shots. Summertime Sadness also uses shadows which we used in our later performance shots gaining inspiration from the effect the manipulated lighting makes on the artist and background. When we showed our first draft to our peers it was commented on, without prompt, that our video was clearly based on a Lana Del Rey video, showing we were using conventions effectively, and that to make it even more obvious we should exaggerate and include more performance shots.

How effective is the combination of your main product and ancillary texts?

(refer to your audience feedback, refer to your research, what conventions did you find and use? what conventions did you challenge?)

I tried to keep a consistent theme between the music video, digipak and magazine advert. In my research, particularly Lana Del Rey, I found that consistency between products can make the artist recognisable over a variety of mediums whether this be through a signature pose or advertising effect. To do this I took note of certain things we did in the video that made it effective and carried this on to my ancillary products. We altered the visual effect of the video as a whole by adding a sepia tone and adjusting the saturation to achieve a shot that was rustic and aged but you could still see the bold red lipstick, with obvious connotations. In my magazine advert I manipulated the saturation of the whole document which changed the effect of all the images, I then used the rubber tool to make the lips return to a bold red, in my advert I added more of a tea stain effect with the sepia using the colour picker tool and brush as I thought this would be more effective, indie and raw in a magazine. I again added the sepia tone for the front and back cover of my digipak which shows a consistency between three products all having the consistent sepia tone and noticeable lips, a convention shown in Lana Del Rey’s videos as her plump lips become the focal point of close up shots. In our music video the artist is the focal point and we manipulated the cutting and placement of shots to exaggerate her. The artist keeps strong eye contact with the camera for the duration of the video in a usually medium shot, her long brunette wavy hair and photogenic face combined to make an easily editable and aesthetically pleasing shot, this is a convention I found in the research I did around magazine adverts shown perfectly in a Marina and the Diamonds advert. I thought our video portrayed the artist perfectly creating an instant and quite intimate recognition of the artist. The strong eye contact and bold lip colouring makes the artist seem seductive also exaggerated with the lip movement and facial expressions which is emphasised by the simple clothing and bare skin, this is a technique used by Lana Del Rey especially in the video we picked most inspiration from, Video Games. The creation of a brand identity is done, in these products, by the close and raw shots to remove the distance between the artist and the audience as the audience will feel closer to the artist who is being newly introduced in a way of getting to her know her as she is “there for the taking” as it may seem she looks quite vulnerable. I challenged the convention shown by Lana Del Rey and Marina and the Diamonds who had just one photo in their advertisements by creating a collage for my magazine advert. As I am introducing “Bliss” as a new artist I wanted to exaggerate her personality and portray this to the audience. I decided to create the collage for the magazine advert rather than the digipak because as the advert is revealing the artist but the digipak is probably only looked at when the audience have bought the album. Using a collage allowed me to piece pictures together to show different sides of her personality, I combined laid back and posed shots to create an overall concept that the artist is relatable yet legitimate. In the video we changed the saturation to darker nearer to the end where the relationship was fading out, this emphasised the narrative of the piece, in the ancillary tasks I used brightness to lighten the sepia tone to make the artist look more attractive to the audience instead of being possibly dull if I had of carried on the darker sepia tone this was a small change between pieces to make them fulfill their individual function but join to become an effective combination.

What have you learned from your audience feedback?

(when did you engage audience feedback (first draft), what were the results of your feedback? how did you change your products based on this feedback? what did your audience feel about your final product?)

I have learnt that the audience feedback is invaluable in the editing process particularly as the video includes our own ideas, concepts and a created narrative I think we were too involved to judge if it worked and would be understood by an audience. We knew what we were trying to portray and spell out to the audience but we needed to ensure this was being readily received. When showing our audience the first draft we received the feedback that there was, at some points, confusion with the narrative. For example some people said “it’s not clear at the end that they’re splitting up” and “some of the random shots are too random and obscure”. It was also commented on that there “needed to be performance shots throughout the whole video” as they were “really pretty”. In the next week we filmed a break up scene, more performance shots and removed random shots such as the spinning chair. We filmed a whole different kind of performance shot as we thought the beginning performance shots wouldn’t fit with the fast paced part of the song. We put Amy in a dimly lit cupboard and used a torch on her face as she sung the song and we filmed a medium/close up shot. The light created shadows and exposed her red lips and facial expressions more clearly, in filming a whole new lot of performance shots we ensured we had no lip syncing problems with the faster pace. The performance shots made it obvious that the artist was the focus despite the narrative, it meant she was more obviously the artist of the song and allowed the audience to recognise this. We also filmed a more exaggerated break up scene and asked our actors to use body language to show their hostility towards each other, they stood far apart and used hand movements whilst arguing and PJ stormed off at the end. In particular the storming off part made it obvious there had been a falling out, this made the shots such as the reverse driving of the car and flashbacks to when it could be seen things weren’t as they seem and had changed more understandable. We filmed some close ups of Amy flicking her hair and looking displeased that we could put in to add the artist expression and emotion towards the narrative of them breaking up. On my ancillary texts I received feedback commenting mainly on things I needed to add to make the pieces more professional looking, I added the “Download on iTunes” and “Amazon” badges to show how the audience could purchase and access the album. I also added some short and snappy reviews from credible sources, I didn’t want to overpower the advert with this as I wanted to stress this artist is Indie and is doing it for the music not for money or popularity but it did need some recognition. To make the advert still look raw and indie I put the reviews in a more scrawly font to coincide with the tea stained effect, so, the piece looks authentic and like someones wrote their review instead of it being typed which looks more manufactured. My Digipak needed production credits to again look more professional, I also put a question on my feedback form asking whether they thought I should keep the front and back cover sepia or the whole book, it was unanimously decided that it should remain just the front and back cover that should be sepia.

How did you use media technologies in the construction and research, planning and evaluation stages?

(list and evaluate the different uses of technology during this project)

vegas - crossfade, speed up, camera - time lapse, blogger, photoshop - colour to red lips, sepia brightness contrast quality trickier than word had to get used to layers and ability to manipulate, overall effect and what thought

To create the desired effects in our music videos we used a variety of media technologies. In the construction phase we used techniques with our camera and edited these in Sony Vegas to create the overall effect. For example when filming we used time lapse by facing the camera towards the sky and formatting time lapse so it took loads of photos of the clouds, and when edited together this made a short montage of moving clouds perfect for our video and the representation of time. In the editing process we used a variety of techniques on Sony Vegas such as cross fading, quick cuts of different shots in a sequence and speeding up or slowing down shots. We crossfaded object shots with performance ones such as the rose and Amy singing on a bench to contrast the colouring and show the link between the two. To do this we placed the shots over each other on the timeline and altered the opacity to create two shots into the one. To exaggerate our song title and overall message ‘Time’ we sped up and slowed down shots, we slowed down the picking of petals but sped up the car shots. To do this we right clicked the specific shot and changed the properties to speed up the shot we increased the number to 4 or to slow it down we changed the number to -0.5. This made our video thorough, it showed that we had properly thought into the narrative, message and content of our video by piecing everything together to create a theme running through the video of ‘time’. We found this video much easier to edit using our skills gained from previous projects, we added all our individual skills to the video by taking it in turns to edit and apply the different techniques such as opacity, cross-fading and quick cut sequences. This video was easier to edit as we made it more into sections and had much more thorough planning which allowed us to edit efficiently and constantly rather than stopping to do more filming or re-work certain things. We thought much more practically in the planning process and were realistic about what we could do as we had previously found we tried to do too much for the time and resources we had.   We used Blogger to showcase our improvements and how our product was developing, starting right from the beginning we showed all our planning on our blog and then tied it together in a concept, we showed all our planning on Blogger and then kept up to date posting our developments in the editing stage for example. When we finished making our music video we could look at Blogger and see how our video had come together and formed from different parts to be a whole. In photoshop I added an sepia effect to the overall product then using the rubber tool to add/return the colour to the lips, I am really pleased with the effect this created and I think I followed all my planning and influences from researching indie conventions. Photoshop as a programme is much more complex than programmes I am used to using such as Microsoft Word for this reason I had to spend a lot of time looking for tutorials on the internet and practising things with pictures before actually creating the product. I needed to adapt to the use of layers and how to manipulate the image effectively by getting to grips with the different tools. The most difficult effect I added was shadowing one of the collage poses, this was to make it edgy and not a simply plain collage that could look quite manufactured. To make it indie I wanted to make it different and on first look you would not see this shadow but when you do you realise there is more to the image than meets the eye. I think this followed everything I had initially stated about how independent artists advertise and conventions I had seen by Lana Del Rey, Marina and the Diamonds or Nina Nesbitt. Although I wanted my image to look gritty and raw so I made it look tea stained for example, I also wanted the product to be professional and so I decided to manipulate the brightness and contrast of the whole piece to add recognition to what could otherwise be seen as an amateur product.

Tuesday, 10 December 2013

Final Video

After considering all feedback we removed some random shots that had no direct link to the narrative (spinny chair) and filmed a long stretch of performance shots for the faster paced bit. I am very happy we included more performance shots as it focuses the video more on the artist and fills in some parts where we had repeated shots. Our peers were impressed with our changes and thought this made the video loads better. I think our video has been edited well fulfilling all aims we had such as working with the rhythm and beat and gives an aesthetically pleasing understandable narrative.

Here is a link to our video.


Thursday, 5 December 2013

Final Magazine and Digipak with links to conventions







Magazine:

To stick to the conventions of current independent artists I have used a very raw collection of images. I have used strong poses, similar to Lana Del Rey, but combined this with laid back poses to reflect the artists personality and create a brand identity quite like Nina Nesbitt. I have used the logo for my artist, Bliss in swirly font, and used the same font for the information below the images. I added reviews and badges after considering my feedback and in a hope to make the advert look more official. I have added an overall sepia effect to the advert and exaggerated a tea stain effect on the images to make the advert look less manufactured and more raw, a typical indie convention as the artist is independent not created and fuelled by money and materialistic connotations. The red lips add another edge to the artist making her seem slightly seductive which could widen the target audience and is a technique used again by Lana Del Rey.

Conventions- raw and natural images with strong poses, reflective of personality, consistent recognisable fonts, reviews and badges, not manufactured (sepia, tea stained), seductive edge


Digipak:

I kept the sepia effect with red lips on the front and back cover, adding production credits after my feedback, to keep consistency between the magazine article and digipak. I also kept the same swirly font as this is the logo for the artist and using the text for the track list adds consistency and a recognisable feature. Similar to Lana Del Rey I added a bold font for the song title in red to match the lips and contrasted this with the swirly logo beneath, I wanted to replicate the convention of Marina and the Diamonds with the text being quite powerful and the faces being sultry. I added a variety of posed and natural more relaxed shots some which are strongly manipulated by Photo shop, for example images 1,2 and 4, but left the third image to show the artist is still serious about music and her representation. I placed images on top of each other to make the artist seem gentle and not overpowering and I mirrored some pictures to show this is just about the artist the only people involved are her. I didn't change the effect of the images on the inside booklet as I wanted to create a consistent theme. 

Conventions- seductive edge, production credits, consistent font/logo, bold font contrasting with a different one, powerful text, posed and natural, manipulated images and natural

Feedback on First Draft!



We presented our music video to the class and left a feedback form for feedback. As you can see our class peer assessed our work and particularly liked the cutting speed, reverse shots, story line and time lapse. It was commented on that there isn't enough performance shots consistently through the video and that some shots aren't relevant. We have therefore decided to shoot some more performance shots and replace some of the random shots with more obviously linked shots. We are also considering shooting more break up shots for our own peace of mind so the story line is blatantly obvious.

It was commented that I need to add production credits on my CD and badges/icons on my magazine article to make it look more 'legit' and professional. This is something I had totally forgotten to do and will definitely make my products look better. I was in two minds about the font I'd used but I received positive feedback on this and so have decided to stick with my original choice. 

Thursday, 28 November 2013

"How to" My main digipak photoshop effects

 
 Creating a Sepia Tone
On front and back covers.


To create a consistent theme from my Magazine advertisement to my Digipak I decided to include a sepia tone in both products. I tested a sepia effect on the whole digipak but decided it didn't stand out enough and made the overall product look quite bland. So, I decided to add the sepia effect to the front and back cover. To do this I selected the layers and went to the toolbox above where the layers are, here is the option to manipulate the hue and saturation. I adjusted the saturation to a quite a weak sepia level, the preset sepia effect was too yellow for my pictures, and decided on a low sepia tone with a black and white edge. I then used the same technique as I had in my advert and used the rubber to return to 'original colour' to show the red lips through the sepia effect. This meant I could include the red lips with the red font with the title and song titles.

 
I decided to manipulate the artists image in the booklet of my digipak. On this example, the first picture, I used opacity and 'multipy' to layer three photos with different movements of the arm and hair over eachother. To do this I placed the three images over eachother the same size. I then moved the images from here using the opacity tool to change the percentage so I could see where the image would be placed on the one underneath. I then chose the multiply effect from the drop down menu next to the opacity tool where I could add a softer effect over the images so it looked like a soft movement. This meant you can see the arms but they dont stand out too strongly. To enhance the movement of the arms I kept the body in the same place which is shown clearly by the black top. Above shows the section with one, two and the final three layers.

Friday, 22 November 2013

Magazine First Drafts and Digipak First

This was my first Digipak draft. I decided to show this to a range of people and see what they thought about the choice of pictures, font and effects. My target audience particularly liked the effect I had used with the black and white/sepia effect but showing the red lips. They commented on how this makes the artist seem seeductive whilst fun and laid back contrasting with the laid back poses. I decided from my feedback to change the font, I used both of my products to finally decided on a font as I tested some on one product which looked good but didn't work with the other product. I finally changed the fonts to a swirly one for the name and block text, following the Lana Del Rey convention, for the song title. As shown below.

This is my first draft for my Digipak, I used a sepia effect and more posing images for the front and back covers where I used a similair effect to my magazine advert using the red lips. I used a swirly and block font also to be consistent with my advert. On the inside booklet I decided to manipulate the images to exaggerate the movement of the artist instead of showing just close up quite serious pictures. The first picture shows the effect of movement and makes the artist seem quite gentle and angellic. The second picture is more to represent the artists personality, the two images show a humorous side to the artist and I mirrored the picture, like in picture 5, to show there is more than one side to this artist. The fourth picture I left as simply a photo as I think it says a lot for itself, the artist looks very alone stressing how independent she is and I think this image is strong enough to stand alone.

Wednesday, 20 November 2013

Magazine Analysis

Marina and the Diamonds

This advert shows the artist, Marina, in the centre of the page showing she is the undistracted focal point. The position the artist is in is a relaxed one and her face is central showing her importance, her expression is quite suggestive and the overall inference of her face is quite seductive. The writing on the page is in a handwritten style font which is quirky and makes the artist seem relaxed without a highly manufactured advert. The artists name is plastered across the advert so not to be ignored with a bright white text contrasting against a murky dull coloured background. The image used in this advert is also the one used in her album which shows consistency and also means that people who may be unfamiliair with the artist will be able to link her in the magazine to her music. The writing at the bottom giving details of her debut album is in a softer font but also in white to stand out against the background. There is a reasonable amount of text which gives all the necessary information to find out more about this artist and her music. The facial expression of the artist is what I particularly like about this advert as it shows some of her personality whilst making you question what message she is trying to portray this adds to the mystery of her and will possibly make people interested in her to find out more about her.

First Draft Feedback

During the post production process we have only interracted with a few of our classmates who have had time to look at our video and give us feedback. This week we finished a first draft and decided to share it with the class to get their opinion on our video and see what we should change.

Here are some particular quotes we have taken into consideration:

"There needs to be more random things from the beginning of the video to make it a running theme"

"There should be performance shots throughout the whole video because they are really nice shots and it's confusing when they just stop"

"Some of the random things have links and some don't maybe you should make them all have a link to show consistency"

"The break up at the end needs to be more obvious with more angry and close up shots"

We have decided we are going to get even more random shots and put them in from the beginning and consider putting performance shots, filming more, and adding them throughout to keep the emphasis on the introduction of the artist. We are also going to film some more angry shots to make the break up more obvious and re consider some random shots.


Thursday, 17 October 2013

Digipak and Magazine Advert planning

I have decided to question a group of friends on what they like to see on a Digipak or magazine advert before I commence my planning. I asked 4 girls and 2 boys what they would appreciate on an independent artists album cover and how they would think they should be represented.

Here are some quotes from the answers on the questionnaire:

In response to "Do you think an album cover for an independent artist should be focused on the artist or something different/irrelevant/abstract?"

Female: "I think the artist should be the focal point because from the image of them you can judge what kind of artist they might be, it's their music so they should be promoting it"
Male: "Sometimes something abstract looks really good but I think with a female independent artist it's a bit different because they rely a lot on their image, although they shouldn't being independent, I don't really think its a bad thing and I think it looks better"

In response to: "Do you have a particular preference for colour schemes of independent artists?"
Female: "I think they should stay away from the really bright pinks and neon colours seen on a lot of mainstream artists albums, they are trying to stay away from this and can often get confused for a mainstream artist if they use them conventions"
Male: "I don't think theres a particular type, it depends what fits with the image, I do quite like independent artists covers in black and white because they look aged, or in sepia to look rustic"

In response to : "What kind of poses or how should the artist be presented on the album cover and in the insert?"
Female: "I think they should look quite relaxed, mainstream artists tend to be really posey and look quite manufactured"
Male: "Probably just natural, if its all about the music as an independent artist they should just want to compliment it not take over with a brand image"

From this feedback I have been looking at images on the internet of both mainstream and independent artists to gain inspiration, I have decided that I want my front cover to be like a collage with the artist pulling lots of different faces, the more serious ones will be around the centre and the silly faces around the edge to show she is serious about the music but is a relaxed character. I want the front cover pictures to be in black and white in a collage with white spacing around each individual image with a red rose, in colour, adorning some corners of the image, the artist will also wear red lipstick and this will be exaggerated. The album insert will be the artist with a red rose doing various poses but keeping the rose as the focal point, I have some pictures further down as examples of poses. The back of the album cover will show the artist walking away as if she is leaving the listener with her music.

Here are some examples of inspiration.


Collage


Mirrored Shot

Collage



Sultry posed over the shoulder shot 

Collage


Laid back/ fun pose


Sultry over the shoulder shot similar to Lana Del Rey

Lana Del Rey Digipak Analysis


 
 
The front cover of Lana Del Rey's album Born To Die shows a low angle shot of the artist in fairly plain, yet quite formal, clothing looking directly at the camera. The white shirt and blue sky with white clouds and green trees make the album cover aesthetically pleasing and makes the artist look quite innocent and untouched. The pale make up with auburn hair and coral lipstick also adds to this effect as she seems young and fresh faced, on closer inspection we can see a red bra under the shirt of the artist which usually connotes danger, this would link to the album title which contrasts with such an innocent representation. The bold font is all in capitals and is contrasted in blue against the white shirt and in white against the blue sky, the text doesn't domminate the cover but is a prominent feature and it is easily recognisable whose album it is. The artists eyes exude various emotions, her dark eyes against the light picture suggest she may be troubled and makes her seem mysterious, there is an eery edge to the picture as it seems to be marking the stark contrast between what the album is about regarding its name, Born To Die and the songs and lyrics included.


The back of the album continues the bold font in capitals and again contrasts in colours. The usually innocent and angellic white colour text contrasts with the red background usually linked to danger. This contrasts against the innocent looking front cover and probably links better to the songs and lyrics on this album. This could mean the technique and convention this artist is using is to imply that all is not as it seems, someone who may pick up this album expecting a young girl singing about everyday issues may be surprised by the deep and dark content of Lana Del Rey's songs. The artwork after inspection seems to be giving off the message that there is more to Lana Del Rey than meets the eye and they are mocking what is expected of her as the back cover and insert express more what her music is about - real deep issues.

This is another picture from her album artwork, here we see Lana again in a white shirt with coral lipstick but posing more. Her hand gesture makes her look more confident than in the album cover where she looks quite uncomfortable in her stance, her face looks quite inquisitive as she pouts with her famous plumped lips. The squint she is pulling towards the camera makes her look like she is looking directly at the audience and engages with them. The image at face value is still aesthetically pleasing.


 


The album insert has lyrics on in a dark, bold and black font which looks almost like it has been written on a type writer possibly linking to the independent artist side who would write their own music. The page is of a white/cream colour and is dominated by bright red blood splattered all over, this links to the name of the album Born To Die but has a stark contrast with the albums angellic front cover. The lyrics seem in place with the blood splatters as some talk about violence whereas others do not fit as they, on the surface, discuss another person but when analysing the lyrics there is a lot more meaning and message behind them which brings relevance to the blood stains.

The Lana Del Rey logo looks a lot like something that would be found in the 50's or 60's as a shop logo or a bar, this links to Lana Del Rey's videos and clothes which have a lot of influence from this era. The text is fancy compared to her usual bold and plain text that is used on albums. The logo all fits together well and again uses capitals showing consistency between her artwork. This logo makes her seem very indepent and a single artist.

 

 
This picture is for the Paradise Edition of Lana Del Rey's album, this particular picture has inspired me for my own work as it has the contrasting red against black and white and her lipstick contrasts too. I like how the picture looks aged but still innocent where the red text and lips add an edge and sense of danger as things aren't as they seem.
 
As Lana Del Rey progressed quite quickly from an independent artist to a mainstream artist I decided to also look at examples of a more independent artist to judge more clearly the conventions. I chose Nina Nesbitt who has come to fame after being spotted on YouTube and touring with Ed Sheeran, she remains close to her roots although visiting fashion shows with celebrities and her music videos often include her friends.
 
Although probably really made up, Nina Nesbitt's album cover doesn't look overly professional as her hair is still messy and the colours are a bit mismatched. Her lipstick stands out a bit similair to Lana Del Rey's  artwork and this is probably because bold lipstick is quite a trend at the moment. It is obvious that Nina is more of an independent artist as the picture looks like it could have been taken randomly and it doesn't look staged, the more natural picture represents her as a song writer as she sings with her guitar and writes her own songs. Like Lana Del Rey, Nina Nesbitt is the focal point of the album cover and so is the name of the album both artists are in a reasonably close up shot just giving different messages.
 
 
 
 

Wednesday, 2 October 2013

Summary of Shots (in first draft)

The title of our song is 'Time' we decided as soon as we chose the song that we were going to include shots of clocks consistently. We manipulated the speed of the clock and included this shot as much as possible when 'time' was mentioned throughout the video. This shows a theme and link between song title and video.

We included shots of 'things' rather than people consistently in our first draft, some of these became more obscure throughout the filming process due to us wanting so much stuff. It was commented on some of this lacked any relevance what so ever and just distracted the attention from the content. This shot however worked well, the rose we used was originally in it's full form and we went on to pick the petals and film the whole process this created a montage showing the transformation of a beautiful flower into a mess, representing the narrative of the video. To put these shots together we simply slowed the footage down by right click > properties > rate and changed this to 0.5 and split the footage up amongst other shots. 

We used time lapse to film the clouds moving in the sky and edited this footage together speeding it up, similar to the previous slowing down process making it 3, to show how quickly things move and change which is the message of our narrative. These shots worked well as a lot of our video is very natural and this was consistent with this and is very aesthetically pleasing, it was commented on that this was a brilliant shot by our peers. 

We used cross fade in a lot of shots to show the links between artist and props or artist and actor. The use of cross fade made basic shots more 'pretty' and made the video more interesting to the audience hopefully keeping them more engaged as they try to understand why these shots are together and their relevance. 


There is varying pace in the song we chose, there are two parts at which the music goes from slow to fast, we wanted to exaggerate these parts and so added a montage of a crossfaded sped up shot of the couple over a very natural shot linking the artist with the location, which we exaggerated. This meant the piece of footage was very fast pace and set the tempo for the rest of the section. 

We included a lot of natural shots of the couple acting very relaxed and not staged. They embraced the location and used it well in how they acted for example walking down steps, looking at the view from the bench and playing on the top of the hill. The relaxed atmosphere makes the narrative more believable and takes the typical cheesy and cringey romantic video to make it more realistic. 

We added shots of ballerina shoes moving to exaggerate the gentle and vulnerable nature of the girl. Some of these shots don't work and we are going to have to re shoot to substitute some of these simply because the movement doesn't fit with the song/there is too much of it. We sped up this footage as specified before to ensure the footage fit with the fast pace and cutting speed. 

We used reverse with shots like this to exaggerate what was happening in the shot. I think this shot is very pleasing on the eye as our actress is very photogenic and the natural environment combine to make a very nice looking shot. I wish we had shot more things like this.

We filmed walking down a corridor and then sped it up and cut it down into parts. It looked like the person was moving very quickly down the corridor this is a technique we had seen and really liked in an Ellie Goulding video. This shot is quite edgy and fits in with the raw and random shots we used. 

Here is an example of a random shot with a link, the nettles are natural but they will sting so its like bittersweet this is the overall message of our video. I particularly liked shots like this as we had a natural theme throughout our video and there is an obvious link between this shot and the narrative.



Saturday, 28 September 2013

First Draft

Here is the first draft. We aren't collecting feedback on this until a later date as we are now working on our digipak and magazine advert and hope to present this to our peers as a whole so they can see the links between products. We are however casually asking our class mates their opinion and shooting new parts as we go along,  if we have time between creating our digipak and magazine article, editing these in.

http://youtu.be/7PR6VeUWQpQ

Thursday, 26 September 2013

Shot plan


DONE
Car shots


PERFORMANCE
Laid down sleeping beauty shot
Stage
Cinema           
Time
Driving speed up shot
Clouds
Dance shots
Clock
COUPLE
High angle field
Saddleworth moor
Woods
Beach
PROPS
Lemon
Water Balloons
Paint
Flower

KEY
Beth’s
Joint at school random
After school
Planned at school

Practise Shots

Here is a link to a short montage of our practise shots. We uploaded them to YouTube so we could email our peers with a link and gain feedback on shots they thought were effective/weren't.


Our Practise Shots